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There is a reason as to WHY I posted the title the way I did, as in this is pretty much a final review before I try to actually finish this. I'm really bothered by not finishing a picture of Furvega, and I've been trying to get one done for almost 18 months now, thats a lot more time I could've used to get a lot more stuff done in the meantime.

Pretty much Furvega is... I 'suppose' you could say he is my fursona, but mostly he's pretty much an original character. I would say... he's possibly the strongest out of all the Ultimegas. If any of you remember that 8-bit deviation I submitted years ago? Well, yeah he's a newer member from them, also I really should submit the sketches I have of the others I suppose...

Back to business: I REALLY NEED your critical support on critique on this, consider it a desperate plea of help from me. I need to know what all I should fix if anything? If you must know I tried using AWD!'s = [link] Panther-Power deviation = [link] as a reference for the muzzle. Also I went to FurAffinity looking under RickGriffin's gallery at his own character's reference sheets as reference sheets for legs and arms *though I haven't really gotten to that part fully quite yet* but there is also the issue regarding Furvega's feet. He has claws on his feet, like any normal ferret would, but they aren't as big comparatively...

I know I haven't started on the feet nor paws/hands, but I'll get there, its just with the lack of room left on the sheet of paper I have to turn the feet...

Seriously, I could REALLY use some critique you guys and gals. @(_@

*I used my webcam to take a picture of this which is why it looks really dark and what not. @(_@; And don't give me crap about the thong, I have it there to try and do a whole body piece to get more practice on drawing the human anatomy. @\(_/@ But critique there could really help as well you know...*

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:iconpeterpan-porno:
i think its very good...legs might need to be a bit longer tho...hmm

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"im no stranger to danger."
:icondeadlyjerm:
This does look rather good. He looks like he'd kick some ass in a fight haha.

I also like his expression, he's like "That's right ladies, check out my bod." haha.

I forget if yer still working or not, but you should buy a Tablet and try drawing on one of those. They help you learn techniques fast.

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"Its a commonly believed fact that assassins cant swim."
:icondrstrangebob:
Hmm. Some helpful hints, eh? Well, lessee now. What could we do to Mr. Furvega here?

I think a longer body and slightly shorter legs might be helpful. This might help with the problem of making it fit on the paper too.

The head is very well drawn but you might think about making it a bit smaller in relation to the overall body to make him look stronger and less like a funny animal cartoon.

Hope this helps you a bit. Let me know when you work on it some more.

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cogito ergo sum
(Latin: "I think, therefore I am")
Dubito, ergo cogito, ergo sum
(Latin: "I doubt, therefore I think, therefore I am")
:iconanimegirlmika:
You said you had some trouble with the feet because the paper isn't long enough...so perhaps you could try to trace what you have to another paper so it's better positioned for extending his legs. He definitely needs some arms and legs but if there's no room to draw them that's definitely the first thing you should try to remedy. Hope that helps a little!

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